Would like fries with that, and would you like to donate to the Ronald McDonald House?

Dayton, Ohio -- Yesterday I bought a coffee at the McDonald's drive thru. The person on the other end of the speaker asked me, "Would you like to donate a dollar to the Ronald McDonald House?"


When I got up to the window, I asked her how many people donate a dollar. She told me about 1 in every 20 cars. That didn't seem like a very good number, so I began to think about how she could modify her question to increase results. I also wondered how many people she asked even knew what the Ronald McDonald House does? I also figured she only has time for a single sentence.

I think her results would be significantly better if she asked this:
"Would you help families whose children are in the hospital by donating a dollar to the Ronald McDonald House"

Why would it be more effective? Because her original question was "would you like to donate a dollar..." She gave no reason to donate a dollar, only a request. It's easy to say "no" to that. It's more difficult to say, "no, I don't want to help families whose children are in the hospital." The new question also puts the "ask" at the end of the sentence, after the reason.

Research has shown that using the word "because" in a request significantly increases the affirmative responses. So, perhaps this question would be even better:

"Would you help families whose children are in the hospital by donating a dollar to the Ronald McDonald House, because it would mean a lot to those families."

The interesting thing about the research is that it doesn't matter what the reason is you give after the word "because," simply using that word increases response.

So today I'm going to buy coffee at the same McDonalds and give the person at the window my new question.

How would you change her original question to make it more effective? What questions do you ask in your solicitation letters that could be made more effective?